Comments

Sweet story with some drama

This is short but not rushed, focus on relationship with well done side characters.

Pacing is good.

Good job Mr Georgie

I confirm there is few case where Celine is used instead of Penny but I have not noted where, sorry

Thanks for letting me know!

There's an error when talking to Penny at the party it calls her Celine

Thanks! I'll check it asap.

Celine and Josh's relationship is well done

No Expectation