Hello there, Just wanted to mention that some of the english translation doesn't show during Yvonne's phone call, the spanish version shows instead.
The main character says "No tienes nada que agradecer, te vere prompto." after Yvonne thanked him for spending time with her. Wich i understood i think, despite never learning spanish. Something along the lines of "No need to thank me, see you soon".
For the path i said i forgave her but did not want to meet, then changed my mind and agreed to meet, then said i can pick you up on my way to airport. I don't know if that's relevant, but maybe it could help you fix it.
Same goes with Mel visiting Lewis. Karen gets her purse then Valerie thanks Mel in spanish "Muchas Gracias" . Then thanks her again in english in a longer text.
Meeting Yvonne in the park -as a friend- she says she wanted to say more things yesterday and the MC answers "Bueno, creo que hoy no tenemos prisa.", i had no idea what that means, but google trad seems to think it means "Good, we're not in a hurry today"
Dorian talk with Mel at the restaurant : Dorian says "i won't inherit anything for you", it may be proper, not sure. I know for sure that "You won't inherit anything from me" works though.
Thank you for your comment, I'm so glad that you are enjoying my game.
I really appreciate your offer about proofreading, but unfortunally I don't have the money to pay you properly. But if you still want to help, maybe I can mention you in the credits if that works for you.
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It appears the link to download is not working anymore, is it possible to get that fixed?
Sorry for the late reply, I didn't had the time to check the messages. I finished to update all the links, the problem should be fixed now.
Excellent, thank you!
Hello there,
Just wanted to mention that some of the english translation doesn't show during Yvonne's phone call, the spanish version shows instead.
The main character says "No tienes nada que agradecer, te vere prompto." after Yvonne thanked him for spending time with her. Wich i understood i think, despite never learning spanish. Something along the lines of "No need to thank me, see you soon".
For the path i said i forgave her but did not want to meet, then changed my mind and agreed to meet, then said i can pick you up on my way to airport. I don't know if that's relevant, but maybe it could help you fix it.
Same goes with Mel visiting Lewis. Karen gets her purse then Valerie thanks Mel in spanish "Muchas Gracias" . Then thanks her again in english in a longer text.
Meeting Yvonne in the park -as a friend- she says she wanted to say more things yesterday and the MC answers "Bueno, creo que hoy no tenemos prisa.", i had no idea what that means, but google trad seems to think it means "Good, we're not in a hurry today"
Dorian talk with Mel at the restaurant : Dorian says "i won't inherit anything for you", it may be proper, not sure. I know for sure that "You won't inherit anything from me" works though.
Thank you!!! I'll do the corrections ASAP!!!
I'm uploading the corrections you mentioned, and in about an hour will be ready.
Thanks again!!!
Just now finding this game and it looks amazing. Do you plan on making more games? I love a good story.
Thanks for your comment and sorry, I just saw it.
I'm glad that you like my game and yeah, I'm making a new one fairly different.
If you want to know more, please check my Patreon page:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/progress-of-del-75214806
Thank you for your comment, I'm so glad that you are enjoying my game.
I really appreciate your offer about proofreading, but unfortunally I don't have the money to pay you properly. But if you still want to help, maybe I can mention you in the credits if that works for you.
In that case, I'm glad to accept your help, you can contact me by email: mr.georgie.dev@gmail.com
Thanks again.
I love your art! This was a great Chapter 1. I can see myself playing through this multiple times once it gets further along in development.
Your English wasn't too bad, either. Far better than many other games out there.
Thank you so much for your comment! I hope you enjoy the next chapters as well. Happy holidays ABTBenjamins